It was ok.
I felt like you could have done more with it. Also, you over-used the gradients. It took away from the whole visual experience. It's not bad, but there's definitely room for major improvement.
3'd.
It was ok.
I felt like you could have done more with it. Also, you over-used the gradients. It took away from the whole visual experience. It's not bad, but there's definitely room for major improvement.
3'd.
Just for the record, I only used one gradient in the whole music video. I used an overlay of a black to white radial gradient over my whole movie. And I feel I made it pretty subtle, so I don't think it takes away from the whole visual experience.
It was ok.
Some of the rotoscoping was terribly done, but others were somewhat decent. I gave it a 3 because I didn't completely find it horrible, but not excellent. I hope you all will just continue working on your animation skills. Cheers.
So you're making a generic Clockday Movie
Well I don't think you should have submitted this. It doesn't really seem like there's much of a plot to it, and if there is, I'm sorry, you should let the audience know a bit more. Now your art could use some improvement style-wise but I'm sure that will come in due time. Well keep working hard mate, you'll improve by next clockday.
-ZenMicroClock
The animation was terrible.
There was hardly any movement at all. And even where there was, it was very robotic. It just looked like you bitmap traced everything. It was just really gross looking. However, it was funny. You just need to work on your graphics and animating a bit more.
Actually, I didn't bitmap trace anything at all. The inside of the car was drawn in Adobe Illustrator. The background was drawn in flash. The wrecked car was drawn in flash, as well as everything else in the movie. So uh.... yeah. Glad you thought it was funny at least.
Nice work
This reminds me of Pat Smith's "Handshake" and "Drink". But this is an easy favorite. 5.
I had never even heard of you before.
And yet, I'm already in love with you/this. This was quite splendid. I 5'd.
In my whole year and a half with the LockLegion, I've only submitted two movies. I'm quite a low key poster, too. Please though, feel free to love me.
Super. Stellar.
As I've said before, quite nice. But why did you upload the .avi file and not the .swf?
5'd it for you.
Wow.
I don't know how I skipped over this. <3
Neither do I, it's ancient.
Epic
Very epic.
You can not kill strawberry clock
though I must say, nice choice of music. Danny Elfman is definantly one of my favorites.
The only thing that bothered me about this was when sbc was flying and had luis on the screen. The image stayed steady instead of moving like it should if it were being targeted by a plane.
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